Itazura Kitsune (Zanpaktou)

Appearance (Sealed): Yomi’s Zanpaktou is a unique one at that. Not taking the form of any true weapon it is within the shape of a simple ring. The ring being the color of her feelings at the time, making it a good mood ring, it also isn’t removable from her hand. It is located on her right ring finger, and is one solid color in pattern that appears to have metal plating, making it shiny slightly.



Appearance: When released Itazura Kitsune vanishes from plain sight, the actual ring becoming absorbed within Yomi. At this stage (And one of the reason why she hates her zanpaktou) Itazura Kitsune shall change Yomi physically having her ears turn into that of a fox upon the top of her head, and her growing a tail, both of which match her hair color etc. She have only one tail when she first releases Itazura Kitsune.

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Ability(ies):


Despite it’s fairly weak and artistic name this power is anything but. Actually enjoying this ability if only because it doesn’t forever, and a pain (Litterally) in her ass to get out, this is the most common power Yomi will normally use. Creating around, and over her in a linear direction phantoms of sorts that resemble her in every way Yomi can have them mimic her movements perfectly to the point where it appears as a solid strand of her own body moving. Obviously these images are not real in anyway, and as such can’t hurt others and will go through other objects etc.


The second tail is one which is activated within Yomi’s mindin an annoying way. By focusing for a slight second (or rather having to) Yomi shall let out the phrase “Intoxicate”, after which a second tail shall grow next to the first, her body now able to manifest both abilities at simultaneously, though the growing of the tail is what makes Yomi get all sassy. This tail stimulates Yomi’s body to the point where whatever organic matter she touches she can excite the nerves within it in anyway, making them feel healed, in pain etc. This effect starts out small, and shall increase as more contact is placed upon the area affected. This effect only lasts as long as Yomi is touching the affected material.


The third tail is activated in the same way as the second tail, the only key feature before activation being that Yomi’s glow shall glow slightly as the tail appears. It is activated by the word “Mask.” After activating Yomi can hide any single thing from anyone’s senses excluding herself. This shall disable all of her other abilities that are active at the time, and will make her slower than normal, making this one of her least favorite powers as it seems too much like her zan and not enough really like her, (Ignore the fact that zan’s are the extension of their owners).

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Appearance: Upon activating her Bankai, Yomi shall become enveloped within a veil of blue like energy, her hair color changing to be that of a ethereal blue in color. When the energy clears it shall reveal the transformation that she has undergone, her tails growing from three to nine, and double in length from their previous length’s. Around her shall dance blue ethereal like energy, which serves no real purpose other than to signify her transformation into what some would call a “Deity”, but she frankly calls it annoying, especially if she gets happy, as all the tails begin to go back and forth like a happy doggies.

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Ability(ies): She has her Shikai abilities as her first three tails in addition to her other tails. (Note: at this stage she can turn off tail abilities at will, and back on using the same process as activation.)


Upon using her fourth tails ability Yomi shall mutter the word, “Enshroud” activating her ability. Her body shall then have a mist appear below her, around her feet like that of an old ghost story. Anyone, whom goes within this mist cloud, shall begin to feel her presence within their body. This shall give them the so called blessing of the fox, allowing for them to move quicker, think faster, and overall give them a boost to relaxes. It shall also cure them of their minor wounds, and seal up current cuts upon their body. The drawback being Yomi cannot move while performing this ability, nor can she use any other Reiatsu based abilities while this tail’s powers are active.


Upon using the fifth tails ability Yomi shall mutter, “Repent”, activating her fifth tails power. Her body shall glow a slight blue in color, all damage she receives/received prior to this form shall increase her own abilities potency, as if the enemy shall be forced to repent for their evil against her. This technique is a set up however for her sixth tail power, and she must be in this form in order to activate her sixth tails power.


Yomi shall mutter the word, “Reap” and with that word her body shall become covered within a blue energy her being seeming to turn ethereal in nature. When this tail is activated all blows done to Yomi shall create a scythe from the energy around her (Or another weapon of her choose, just scythe is her favorite), and with it she shall be able to finally have a weapon within her hands. This is no ordinary weapon however, as per her fifth tails ability the weapon shall grow in power depending on the amount of damage she has taken over the course of the fight, making her weapon of choice as strong as the enemy’s attacks in theory.


Upon saying the word, “Sanctify” Yomi shall activate her seventh tail. Also known as the tail of luck and protection (At least to her) it shall create a barrier around her, a barrier which shall absorb the damage of all attack she has previously suffered from, and transfer them into reiatsu for her to use instead. This barrier can only block one attack at a time in the sense of it being the same attack, in addition to it only being able to block attack she has previously been hit with in some form. (Note, even if it the barrier touching the enemy the effects of her abilities still apply.) (For clarity this shield only blocks the first action by the enemy to make contact with it.)


Upon activation of her eighth tail Yomi shall mutter the phrase “A god lives among the stars” At which point her tail shall glow a starry blue. When this is activated she shall stand still for a short while during which a veil of a star strewn sky shall envelop over her, and the target of her wraith. The range of the veil is that of 10 sq meters, afterward the range shall be infinite in all directions. Within this veil/realm Yomi shall be able to appear wherever she wishes at first, afterwards she must move as normal. In addition to this as long as she puts Reiatsu into the bevel it shall not fall no matter the obstacle. Affecting it. Within this realm she can create one astral projection that she can control as if it was herself within the realm. This projection cannot harm anyone nor can it be harmed in any way as it a projection. (Mostly it’s used to mock the ones trapped there)


Yomi’s only true attack based ability, it is activated by her activating the her final tail, and by saying the phrase, “My soul, and my pride shall fallith from this earth. Make me like the god of this world; reshape me in an image of purity and faith.” This is perhaps the one power which Yomi shall never activate simply for the drawback it presents. When activated her ninth and final tail shall glow, aligning all of her tails, and having them grow exponentially to the point where each one can wrap around her body completely. Each one of her tails shall gain the power of double her own at the current moment; her own tails becoming strong enough to block simple attacks like it was nothing. They also shall become like a zanpaktou in that they despite being “blunt” Can sever limbs just as a blade can. The previous abilities shall no longer become available below seventh tail, and when activated her tails shall attach to her very soul. Meaning while she can deactivate her Bankai, her fox form shall never disappear for at least another one hundred years after activation. This form also drains Reiatsu at a steady rate, and reduces her speed slightly as well as her own mobility. (As a side note the double power does not increase her abilities power by double, just her tails themselves.)



Name: Itazura kitsune
Gender: Female
Height: 2’ 1”
Weight: 14lbs

Appearance: Itazuna generally tends to wear doll like clothes if only because she is pretty much a doll. Tending to wear more along the lines of what her “master” is wearing Itazuna will frequently copy Yomi’s outfits just to annoy her. She is quite tiny, at a height of two feet one inch, she is a little bugger whom is quite susceptible to hugs, and cuddles. She is a light little spirit only weighing a mere fourteen pounds. She has light purple hair which extends down to her waits, and deep purple eyes. One unique feature about her is that she does not possess a “lower” body, and instead has a little ghost/fox like tail which is uses to float around instead, and buzz around your head.

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Race: Loli Asian
Hair color: Light purple
Eye color: Deep purple
Body type: Small, fairly like, light.

Personality: Itazuna is a little jerk. Frequently liking to mess with Yomi and others she enjoys the sight of you being confused. Tending to act innocent after being caught she will just make a cute little chibi face, and hope you love chibi’s. She doesn’t really have a soft side and tends to act like Yomi when a thanks in order, making her a stubborn little fool of a trickster. Othher than this however she stays fairly quiet, though when she is bored enough she likes to appear upon Yomi’s head and taunt her slightly or annoy others, but other than that she is just a normal little spirit of a zan hanging out within Yomi’s little inner world.


Realm: Shizen’s realm is that of space. Where nothing moves but the few fragments of emotions Yomi has. Which each forming of a new memory another fragment forms, and Shizen takes enjoyment out of watching meteors, super nova’s, and planets form within Yomi’s soul. The scenery of the realm changes every time Yomi has visited it switching from planet to planet, or just her being within space itself, nothing remaining the same since the last visit. Making it quite a troublesome realm to visit which is yet another reason why Yomi dislikes her Zanpaktou.

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I might just be ignorant but I feel as though even though it takes so much time the high lvls of the Shikai are a bit much but I mean I don't know the standard for Zanpaktou this could be perfectly fine and I am just stoopid.

Meh I tried to make it strong, but put a limiter on it via the post count so I have to build up too it. I could limit it more of coure or describe it more in detail, but since most peoples abilities just go "LOL" right off the bat I thought it would be a good counter balance.

Hmm, I am not going to protest it, I just think its a bit much thats all ;P

Though a question,

She has to be in a fight for the counter to start right? Like combat fight, because if this works and charges while she simply has a angry discussion with her zanpaktou released it is a bit much.

Um I wouldn't use it outside of a fight anyway so yeah she does, I could put it in. And it isn't really much as it takes me several posts to charge up posts in which you pretty much get free shots left and right at her etc she her ability is weak at those stages.

Even then when she does get up she could use her super moves, but at the same time then she can't even use those types again for the rest of the fight etc.

Actually you know what I won't comment anymore on how I need to defend it, instead I would like to ask if you did read it? You said it is a bit much but if you had read it sure some things will need improvement I am sure, but it isn't nearly as bad as it looks, hell you didn't even adjust your kido app as you say you aren't a mod? Then why even do mod work, in all honesty your lazy attitude is annoying me today. Make suggestions or not stupid comments and adjust the system you said with the things I asked it's not hard at all, and then I will listen to you alright?

Edit: This may seem a bit harsh, but you are being a little weird lately as normally you would actually make a suggestion and help me with this instead of just going "Meh it's a bit much, meh I am a member" it seems a bit trollish in all reality >.>

Pikante wrote:

Um I wouldn't use it outside of a fight anyway so yeah she does, I could put it in. And it isn't really much as it takes me several posts to charge up posts in which you pretty much get free shots left and right at her etc she her ability is weak at those stages.

Even then when she does get up she could use her super moves, but at the same time then she can't even use those types again for the rest of the fight etc.

Actually you know what I won't comment anymore on how I need to defend it, instead I would like to ask if you did read it? You said it is a bit much but if you had read it sure some things will need improvement I am sure, but it isn't nearly as bad as it looks, hell you didn't even adjust your kido app as you say you aren't a mod? Then why even do mod work, in all honesty your lazy attitude is annoying me today. Make suggestions or not stupid comments and adjust the system you said with the things I asked it's not hard at all, and then I will listen to you alright?

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[10/7/2010 11:40:43 PM] Chrono: Meh I'll work that part out with Pik

She didn't like the rest of my ideas, told me you would work with her on it, I wasn't being lazy I ran ideas by Fei. But like usual your being difficult and refuse to take any criticism. Whatever, I even said the previous post that I was fine with the ability, the second part was a question, were chastising over questions now? Fine I will make a note to not make comments anymore. And a small note, I made the ONE change you told me to make the system aka the maximum of 19 +'s, from there it wasn't laziness I just wanted you to make changes to it based on how you felt on the topic, I mean I am not you, this isn't my forum, in no way do I wish to implement or suggest too much for it that you do not like thus I don't do too much. I apologize if I somehow offended you last night, I meant nothing behind it.

Right won't feed the troll anymore, come back when you actually have something to say that is productive and not a personal attack on me based off your own conjecture. My argument at least had facts behind it man, and based off of them I could make the assumption that you did not read enough, nor did you really care enough.

You said yourself you are just a 'member" so why are you even commenting? If you want to comment on stuff like this at least have the proper attitude so I can take you seriously. Also I was answering your question, but at the same freaking time it was a question which implied that you did not read any of my abilities, nor the lore behind it. If you would have actually read it you would find out that Yomi hates activating her sword meaning no she wouldn't be charging it, as she dislikes it in the extreme. She would only ever activate it when she is going to get destroyed within a battle, and has no other choice really.

Also Fei never told me this so I was in the dark on that matter, so sorry if I was ignorant of something happening due to not being informed. It was a misunderstanding that I take blame for as I should have asked and been more on the ball. Though if you don;'t wish to edit something that you created, and make it better then by all means why should you get any credit as it seems you really just do not care, right now. You keep saying this is my forum which it is, but if you make a suggestion shouldn't you just naturally wish to finish it, and follow through?

Also you didn't say you were fine with it you said it was a bit much meaning you had an issue with it, but you weren't offering any help. Don't twist your words to make me look like an ass it's just rude.

My one suggestion then, make it so you can't control so many natural disasters okay? Thats all I have to say, think about a lot of the shikai's in bleach and try to not be so blanket with effects, you have a bit too many.

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If you would have actually read it you would find out that Yomi hates activating her sword meaning no she wouldn't be charging it, as she dislikes it in the extreme. She would only ever activate it when she is going to get destroyed within a battle, and has no other choice really.

Fine, character trumps it. I read this, was trying to not make it a whole Personality based thing, but it's fine. I hope that you never let you're RL feelings affect your character cause then you're simply betraying yourself.

Lolz I can only use one at a time, and if I switch then the counter goes back to zero. Which makes me suck for even longer than before XD

Meh why do you think I swear on every forum I am on, especially in a few fights I was in, or why I make so many mistakes when attacking. Because I know doesn't mean my person knows, and it's one of the most annoying things in the entire world.

Sorry if I came off harsh though, and a few things were misunderstandings, but you did come off a bit meh, at least in my mind I could be wrong.

Pikante wrote:

Lolz I can only use one at a time, and if I switch then the counter goes back to zero. Which makes me suck for even longer than before XD

Meh why do you think I swear on every forum I am on, especially in a few fights I was in, or why I make so many mistakes when attacking. Because I know doesn't mean my person knows, and it's one of the most annoying things in the entire world.

Sorry if I came off harsh though, and a few things were misunderstandings, but you did come off a bit meh, at least in my mind I could be wrong.

It's alright, I vented to Fei... Who wasn't even there o.o shows how much she does for me, we all good?
*Initiates Bro Bump*

Yeah pretty much, but meh if you have issue with me just start off with a suggestion, it makes my tone in my head much nicer. I try to do with you guys >.>

*Bro bump, and off to dinner*

Locked until further notice. Ill read up on this and talk with Chrono and pik SEPERATLY about the matter and unlock it when I see fit.

okay, Im ready to unlock this. In my opinion, I personally dont really see that many problems. HOWEVER, the problems I do see, need addressing.

1. The first thing I see is that for the flood ability, does water just "Appear?" Or does it rain down over a general area. Cause its Kinda hard to make a flood that small grow that fast you know? (If better clerifacation is needed ill supply it.)

2. The earthquakes. This is for natural disastures okay? this isnt a devil fruit anymore lol NO SKYQUAKES!!! Period.

3. For the Tornadoes, so they start like a little dust devil then turn into a giant Whirlwind of sorts. Okay, fine I can deal with that, however, I think there should be a labeled range as to how far the tornadoes can go before they dispurse/you lose control of them.

4. For the heat wave, does it move around you, or is it one stationary spot? Cause if it moves around you it would be completely different than if it stayed in one spot.

5. I like the strength sapping bit, however in the final form, I know it takes a while to get there however, complete control over lightning strikes? That kind of speed and power has enough to auto hit, and more than likely auto kill. I think a more appropriate thing would be you can control when it strikes, not when, and if you do that you would need some kind of cool down as to how many bolts can hit at the same time cause i dont wanna see no turbo controller shit with lightning.

6. The last point I wanna say is the Limnic Eruption. This kind of thing is not a natural disaster, things like this are man made gas leeks. Unless you can defend yourself on this point I dont wanna see it anymore. This has the potential to let you make a nuke after all, you could just learn a simple spark Kido, snap your fingers after activating it, and since no range for the gasses are specified, you could potentially destroy the world and be unharmed.

*Is already remaking them as he never even planned on using this ability much, and only wanted it for plot, but whatever, will just change to a different zan concept instead...*

Changed to a different Zan review it accordingly.

Approved. Talked via aim after misreading D: